Angel in the dark

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    Angel in the dark
    With the wings of evil
    I consume madness
    master devil I gave you

    Angel in the dark


    I pursue destruction,
    emotion, revolution

    Powers of pain gain me advanced

    With the wings of evil
    I consume madness
    master devil I gave you

    Angel in the dark

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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on Angel in the dark

    03-02-2009

    the begining is alsom and very emotional but when you reapeted it the second time it ruined the power of the poem. i would have ended this poem after Angel in the Dark. then i would have used a diferint line to and more power to it.
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