Love Park

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This is based on the expierence at Philadelphia's Love Park.

Love Park

                               Water Rising
               A walk around the fountain
                   People enjoy the place
                   With a smile on her face



                          Take a chance
                          Take a glance



                           See how love
                     Rises above the stars
                           See how each
                One does not include a bleack



                     Love Park Love Park

                      I Love the Love Park

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In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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