Mr Creeper

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  • Death

    Mr Creeper
    It happen that night
    the fright has ignite
    he has come back

    The grave gave him dark fears
    spears fire of pain
    gain him the strength of evil

    Master devil has risen upon
    grieve.

    This night is a fright when Mr.Creeper
    comes.

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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on Mr Creeper

    03-02-2009

    its good but you need to work on the power of your words and not the words them selves
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    lovethoseclones commented on Mr Creeper

    02-04-2009

    your a great writer star. this one isnt my favorite but dont let that get you down....!!!!
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    bforibus commented on Mr Creeper

    02-04-2009

    it seems like u rushed this one. i like the subject and how dark it was going to be. But it doesnt feel like u made love to it.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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