AT WHAT POINT?

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    AT WHAT POINT?


    I really want to know
    At what point thinking about me stops
    And thoughts and needs of others come first?

    Could it been when I find a friend, lover or spouse?
    I know at some point you need others and others need you
    But being a lonely ranger could be very fun too

    After all, the best things in life requires just you
    I mean, to be a success and achieve your dreams,
    All you need is a determined you

    My confusion here is the fact that no man is an island
    And lonely times sometimes creep in
    The need to share a burden also boils within

    At what point do I then learn to balance and blend
    My dreams, love life, family, friends and all the world’s got to offer?
    At what point is all I ask, answers! answers! urgently I crave!

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    phatdaddee commented on AT WHAT POINT?

    11-27-2009

    Great poem! What a dilemna! Matters of the heart, matter more than anything! Everything you pursue in your life comes from a desire born in your heart. The difficulty stems in discerning a desire of the heart and a desire of the flesh, sometimes they run paralell. Enjoy not having to deal with it while you can! (SMILE)

    eazy commented on AT WHAT POINT?

    02-06-2009

    at what point when ur heart is at peace but some we all need to take a risk.not bad

    eazy commented on AT WHAT POINT?

    02-06-2009

    at what point when ur heart is at peace but some we all need to take a risk.not bad

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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