WHAT AN INSPIRATION?

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    WHAT AN INSPIRATION?

    How come I write my best?
    When I’m in the mist of tears?

    I wonder how I get to rhyme.
    At those times I feel like lime?

    How I reach out fast for pen and pad?
    Just to put these pains on plains?

    What a better way I‘ve found
    To unburden those acquired pound?

    In the mist of depression and hurt,
    I list my thoughts for other’s drought.

    I hope one day, just one day
    This piece of poem would make your day

    Giving you the desired succor
    Rather than add to your moment of sour.

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    Niecy commented on WHAT AN INSPIRATION?

    03-13-2009

    Inspiration penned at its best! Yeah I would guess this came 'In the Mist of Tears.' Just an overflow of the hurt & pain that the heart releases. Out of Sight ~ Excellent write. :)
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    samuelj commented on WHAT AN INSPIRATION?

    02-22-2009

    That's why you a poet....our emotions are not plain to see by all....nice thought keep it going
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    eazy commented on WHAT AN INSPIRATION?

    02-06-2009

    tell me rita what really inspired u to write the poem?what was ur state of mind?the poem is deep to me.eazy
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    eazy commented on WHAT AN INSPIRATION?

    02-06-2009

    tell me rita what really inspired u to write the poem?what was ur state of mind?the poem is deep to me.eazy
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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