BATTERED

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    BATTERED

    There was a time in my life when my future seemed bright,
    Nothing could go wrong, everything was so right,
    Then one day it changed with the impact of a chair,
    The good life was over, maybe it never really was there,
    With a rage I'd never seen his face turned obscene
    And his anger was swift, as the chair he did lift,
    He swung it and hit it repeatedly on the floor,
    The wrought iron he twisted till it resembled a chair no more,
    I could never prepare for his rage came and went,
    Many years on tip toe were soon to be spent,
    Ducking when able to get out of his way
    Lest he hit me and twist me like the chair that day,
    Try as I might to escape his wrath,
    There was no escape from his destructive path,
    His anger grew and so did my fear,
    I tried to run, but there was nobody near,
    No one to take me in and be my friend,
    So I always came back and endured it again,
    Sometimes he was calm and I'd start to relax,
    He was in control, but it didn't last,
    The violence grew worse, I was strangled and pinned,
    My world turned bleak; I knew I'd never win,
    As the air in my body was suppressed by his hands,
    The room slowly darkened and I knew death was at hand,
    When his anger was spent he slowly let go,
    I waited in silence hoping no one would know
    The horror I lived every day, every night,
    Walking on tip toe, living in fright.
    Behind closed doors of the average home
    Are others like me living the same kind of life,
    Their dreams too are shattered, fear rules their life,
    I now have left, my freedom attained,
    But life as I know it will never be the same,
    There is no escape, no freedom inside,
    The memories are there and from them I can't hide,
    The happiness I wished for can never be,
    For just like the chair, you also destroyed me.

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    IAMLIKEU commented on BATTERED

    05-21-2009

    I LOVE YOUR STORY TELLING ABILITY AND LIKE THE WAY YOU WEAVE THE DESTRUCTION OF THE CHAIR THROUGHOUT I AM LEFT WITH A TOUCH OF HORROR, SADNESS AND LITTLE HOPE PERHAPS THAT IS WHAT YOU INTENDED THE READER TO FEEL- THE LONG LASTING HURT OF ABUSE FEEL FREE TO READ AND RATE MY POEMS

    Susan

    06/20/2009

    thank you for your comment. I have been a little down lately and haven't felt much like writing or checking out these web sites. You understood the poem very well. I will check out your poems too.

    copergirl commented on BATTERED

    01-13-2009

    I felt this emotion just as you have and you described it so well. I hoe someday you are past it, but then I too know that what we experience will always be a part of us. But "what doesn't kill us, makes us stronger".

    Susan

    06/20/2009

    Thank you for the comment. This experience will never not be part of who I am. I am not sure if it made me stronger.

    Phoenix9 commented on BATTERED

    01-13-2009

    fantastic and hit the nail on the head, so much abuse in this world, more women even men should read this as it say's what we all know only deny, bringing it out in the open for all to realize!!!!

    Susan

    06/20/2009

    Thank you for your comment. I haven't been on this site for a while because I was very sick last year and this year the computer died and I lost my passwords. I finally found this one so i am back.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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