Betrayed (The complete)

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This is a copy of an original piece that I posted earlier.  When I showed this site to my sister, she reminded me that I had left out 4 lines from when I wrote it in 9th grade.  I also tried to revise some of the lines for fluidity.

Betrayed (The complete)

BETRAYED

You betrayed me,
I couldn't see.
I trusted you,
and what did you do?

To me you had lied,
I Believed YOU when you cried.
I was betrayed,
Yet still I stayed.

For you I was believing,

Through all of the deceiving.

I stayed with you the whole way through,

It wasn't something I thought you would do.

 

And now you must know,

That I trusted you so.

For you the rules I would bend,
Because I was your friend.

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Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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