Death

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    Death

     Beaten, battered, Broken

    Neglected, Needing, Nothing

    This is how the nightmare begins

    Waiting patiently for it to end.

     

    Moving on

    Pain still lingers

    New loves can't understand

    No one can fix the pain inside

     

    No one understands

    No one really tries

    At last I found the bitter end

    Death will stop my cries.

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    OBJuan commented on Death

    10-18-2009

    All shallow things eventually evaporate and are deposited elsewhere and if you think about it, had it stayed, it might have stagnated and turned ugly better to have the memory of a nice pond, then to be stuck with an ugly bog. And in leaving, has left you with a creative pain. And better able to wade.
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    TiannaMarie

    11/26/2009

    Thank you. It isn't often that I can write, but sometimes when I am at my lowest point, poems form in my mind.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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