Broken

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  • Emotional Sadness Loss

    Broken

    thunder, lightning, rain, hail.
    pouring, beating, slashing, stale.
    wet, cold, shivering, mess.
    lost, alone, hopeless.

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    Artie commented on Broken

    10-22-2009

    You just pointed out all the reasons I work indoors - 10
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    Paleidia commented on Broken

    07-12-2009

    With few words I have felt your profound pain. Keep writing!
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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