CAN YOU

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CAN YOU

CAN YOU TRY TO IMAGAIN A LIFE YOU COULD LOVE, WITH OUT PAIN OR DECEPTION, WITH OUT ENEMIES TO SHOVE...
CAN YOU ONCE TRY TO FATHOM, THE WAY THAT I LIVE, CAN YOU ONCE TRY TO SANCTION, THE STRENGTH TO FORGIVE...
CAN YOU LOOK PAST AN IMAGE, CAN YOU RECOGNIZE VALOR, WHICH HAS PAST DROVE YOU NUTS..
CAN YOU LEARN OF ACCEPTANCE , IN THINGS YOU DONT KNOW, CAN YOU OFFER REPENTANCE, UPON WINGS THAT WONT GROW...
CAN YOU EVER LET SOMEONE, JUST GIVE YOU A HAND, CAN YOU EVER BE LOYAL, TO A COMRAD OR MAN.
CAN YOU LOOK AT THE REASONS, WHICH MADE ME INSAIN, CAN YOU TASTE OF THE FREEDOM, WHICH COMES ONLY FROM PAIN...
CAN YOU LIFT UP AN INFANT, WHO FELL TO THERE KNEES, CAN YOU CONQUOR AN ENEMY, WHOS SPREADING DESIESE...CAN YOU LIVE WITHIN DARKNESS, AND HELP THOSE IN NEED, CAN YOU DEFEND WHATS PRICELESS, THEN NOURISH A SEED...

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redbloodink commented on CAN YOU

02-09-2010

this was a well deserved 10+ ........... fantastic...... red

redbloodink commented on CAN YOU

02-09-2010

such talent... just an outstanding write.... as I read this through I was enticed to keep reading.......... red

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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