My Soul Is Now In Hell

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    I wrote this one with the mindset of being the guy who accidentally overdosed and somehow got the chance to write something to send back to mankind. I know it's a tad bit harsh but so is death, especially when it's an accident.
    God Bless, William

    My Soul Is Now In Hell

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    I've stared back on my past, I've glared across my mind,
    I've felt the scars upon my soul, regretting all I find.

    Why was I such a fool, my life so filled with pain,
    The dope, the fight's and booze, all drove my life insane.

    I ran from my Great Spirit, what a rebel to the bone,
    I thought I knew it all, what a fool so damn alone.

    I thought I was so happy, but yet I could not laugh,
    I thought I had some wisdom, just could not understand.

    My only goal in life, was merely to stay high,
    But little did I know, that dope would help me die.

    The bullets in my flesh, the blades that cut my skin,
    The scars are here to stay, but mostly deep within.

    Put poison in my veins, built stone within my heart,
    That one last overdose, now tear's my world apart.

    Truth or consequence's, the game I know so well,
    My bodies in the morgue,
    And my soul is now in hell.

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    Worthless commented on My Soul Is Now In Hell

    10-10-2009

    Ask God for forgiveness and he will save you! I would say I know how you feel but all the pain I deal with and dealt with I've remained sober and I will tell ya, I'm not sure it's worth it! I'm about to go insane! Just about everyone I know does drugs and drinks and my sister is a cutter. So I know how people feel, I just don't understand how they think it makes it go away? It just makes it worse everyday and they don't understand that? But I do understand... It's amazing that your a guy and you're expressing your feelings. I bet you and your wife are happy! Another good one.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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