Cat Tracks
The blown, white snow
wraps in embrace around
wraps in embrace around
a green plank porch waiting
for the golden cat's prints
Cat Tracks
7 Comments
Tags: Imagry
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SEVEN commented on Cat Tracks
08-14-2010
- As usual Frost......errr Paolo u keep me reading...Kudos
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rsalassi commented on Cat Tracks
07-07-2010
- There's a touch of Frost in this, and, indeed, some of your pieces here on OP. Good write.
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knight4696 commented on Cat Tracks
04-27-2010
- Paolo - You have a special gift my friend - You can convey a simple thought or see so much in everyday objects - package your words in such a way that the reader can draw so much out of them - no matter how few words you use. Great write my friend! :) Ken
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dancinghawk commented on Cat Tracks
02-10-2010
- oh yes, this does make me want to sit right down and lie in wait for the golden cat ... maybe with a cup of coffee, lol ... beautiful vignette, encapsulated concisely ... -dh
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dahlusion commented on Cat Tracks
02-05-2010
- Gorgeous and tender metaphors, again, my mind pulling me there with you, only to feel the chill...
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