comfort

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    comfort

     I see you pass the flowers that are placed beside the road
    god feels your sadness as you carry your heavy load
    In the middle of the night when sleep wont come
    God softly rocks you as the Angels hum
    I know he is missed but will never be gone in your heart
    But you still look for comfort while alone in the dark
    God is there in the smell of the flower and the buzz of the Bee
    He is there in the bend of a Dogwood and when you drop on a knee.
    He and the Angels come to  sooth and embrace 
    God waited for your son and the Angels prepared his place

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    carynontherhine commented on comfort

    01-20-2011

    Is your loss that of your son? These poems make me cry with feeling the emotions you display and how you look for comfort when really nothing will do except for the return of your loved one. Wonderful write of pure love. Hugz
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    StandingBear commented on comfort

    01-17-2011

    A beautifully sad work you've created and written with a very smooth flow... StandingBear
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