still

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    still

    silent longing miserable but fearless
    a constant battle to replay
    day upon day
    searching the crowds for you
    a song a sound a smell
    triggers the war within
    surrender I must
    so I can survive
    the pain of you
    trying to ignore that
    I indeed love you

    still

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    carynontherhine commented on still

    01-20-2011

    Wow is all I can muster up as my emotions go up and down. I feel for you and your pain. The worst pain in life. I love your ending of so I can survive the pain of you trying to ignore that I indeed love you still. And the way you brought still down a bit further from the poem was very intense for me. It validated even more the love. Hugz
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    meme17

    01/20/2011

    thank you so much

    TinaD commented on still

    01-18-2011

    This is a lovely and refreshing poem on lost love. Reminds me of the poem I wrote - Panther In The Night. Good job.
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    kdarcy commented on still

    01-18-2011

    The soft subtle reminders that never seem to go away, still can be a good thing, be well k
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    HarverTomsson commented on still

    12-21-2010

    Evocative, and passionate. this poem embraces the desolation of so many new widows or those simply left behind by a dissolute mate. Harv
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