daddy

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just something i thought of cause my father is thinking of giving up as a father.

daddy

daddy, don't leave me just cause i am incorrect, show me a little respect. i know i am not what you wanted, but try to understand. you are now a dad and its not that bad. just don't hate me, cause i am not the one that chose to be born, and you can't just make me unborn. don't act like you don't notice me and its not hopeless. just try and you may find, that it will change your mind about not having me. i love you daddy and all i want is for you and i to be happy. so lets try at this father and daughter stuff, i think we will make it though this im sure of it. so lets get through this together, and it will take some effort but i think we can get through it. so don't give up on me just yet.

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sevyn7 commented on daddy

01-28-2014

you write pure from the heart, I like your poems a lot.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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