darkness

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darkness

as  i take my last painful breath
i relize that i made horable mistakes in my life
and now i see at the end of my of my life
i cant change what is already done
i don't know what hurts the most the hard feelins
or just knowin i cant make it right
its like falling in a dark hole no light
no air to breathe all there is is me and my self pitty
i hope one day i will wake up and his all will just be a nightmare
but it is far worst it real life no going back not every body get the luck of
another chance thats why its life nothing is evey fair or is it you tell me

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Teardrops commented on darkness

01-22-2011

To learn from your mistakes is to grow and be strong . Great write my friend loved it Marie

koolmom0 commented on darkness

01-22-2011

Lil Niece, making mistakes is ok, the important thing is what you learn from them. Great poem honey...:) Love Aunt Rita

Sx9 commented on darkness

01-16-2011

darkness speak in a strong tone,for today i see clearly,,this is life and mistakes are seldom corrected,so live right,honest and speak the truth,darkness is sad if you find your heart in such a place at that time,,

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

rebecca14’s Poems (19)

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