pain

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pain

                         if the world was painless
                         then i would be truely happy
                         no more cryin and drama 
                         just a life full of happyness  
                         and peace no hurt and pain
                         every one watchs but no one
                         sees they pain that he causes maybe someone
                         will get it one day

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Chaos128 commented on pain

12-09-2010

I guess it's about whether you're going to conquer your pain or let it conquer you. Terse and tightly emotional work.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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