famliy

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famliy there is going to be problems

famliy

my family is not simple and easy
everyone dont get along and there
is no way to have a famly get together
with out fighting but we do okay we are not fake
we show are issuse let each other know you messed up
big we say i hate you and throw each other out of the house but
we also show that we care and love and we willalways be there for each other no my famliy is not perfect if it was it would be a reality show

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koolmom0 commented on famliy

06-07-2011

I agree honey, our family is out of this world LOL but we do love each other. I love you and I hope you have a great day...Love Aunt Rita

rebecca14

06/13/2011

love you to and i know rite

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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