Especially Valentine

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    Especially Valentine

    Happy Valentine's Day to my baby;my love,

    You must be heaven sent like an angel from above.

    If there's any ups and downs,I'll stand right beside you,

    If anyone asks about my love,I'll never deny you!

    I'll get you some of what you want,but everything you need,

    I've got your back when no one else will,and together we'll succeed.

    There's a long road ahead and together we're as one,

    Every step that we take, brings the best that's yet to come.

    We're moving down our paths,but in the same direction,

    As we take this narrow road,I'll be your protection.

    If you ever get weak,I'll carry you on my back,

    And if times get tight,I'll take up the slack.

    We'll make it to the end,or shall I say our goal,

    And we'll do it while we're still young,not when we're gray and old.

    Well now I guess I'll end this,though you've heard this many times,

    You're my baby every day of the year, "Especially Valentine."

     

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    kmooney commented on Especially Valentine

    11-14-2009

    Another good one Vic. I like your style man. You write with so much passion. This one has good rhythm and cadence. Very well done. Thanks for sharing... K

    themommyof2 commented on Especially Valentine

    11-11-2009

    Kind words for a child to hear. There should be many more parents willing to tell their children how the feel inside. Some are left to wonder what their parents think.

    nonners commented on Especially Valentine

    11-08-2009

    aww the words all women love to hear. lovely testament to love!

    timdman29 commented on Especially Valentine

    09-30-2009

    Nicely written and like the other poem, nice flow..

    1990lh commented on Especially Valentine

    09-24-2009

    aww wow that was very sweet and beautiful i really enjoye the read nice job and like always the flowed was perfect . :0)

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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