Falling Ashes

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    A Poem written for an old friend who struggled with adictions but has now over come them.

    Falling Ashes

     They rose from being condemned-
    All the while falling-
    From the depths with in thier own souls-
    Freezing stillness-.....................................

    Silence from within the empty darkness-
    Motionless they fell-
    Fearless they held on
    to the coldness that arose from them-

    Demons entering this sacred emptiness
    leaving them feeling exhausted-
    breathing silently them went
    within the darkness to struggle free from its grip-

    Escaping this hell-
    They now awake free
    from the demons the called addictions-

    Falling ashes they once were-
    Now they rise high-
    High on life-

    copyright(2000) Tina J

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    Rhymer commented on Falling Ashes

    02-05-2010

    Your imagery is excellent the write exceptional. really enjoyed this one. I like the ending to overcome.
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    heavensdaughter

    02/15/2010

    thank u

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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