Let him rest in peace

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    A poem written ten years ago for a friend that was murdered.

    Let him rest in peace

    Sadly he died in the youth of his life-
    Twelve days just after he turned 18-
    such compassion for life-
    Whom he had trusted, turned to be fatal-
    A " friend" he had met in a time of need-
    An "escape" for him in his time of tears-
    In his innocent eyes he would have never seen-

    His new "friend" was the road to his grave-
    Blind everyone, we know see-
    Late one evening in the summers heat-
    she had guided him to the rivers edge-
    To "romance" his sweet heart-

    Than with a switch at hand-
    She cold heartily took his last breath-
    MURDER-
    She murdered an innocent man-

    Reasoning, we still have none-
    Its been six years since he has been killed-
    Let him rest in peace now-
    Let his soul be-
    Come forth you murder-
    God will One day judge you-
    Cops never got Steve's justice-
    I know one day our maker will-

    copyright(c) 2000 Tina J

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    Rhymer commented on Let him rest in peace

    02-05-2010

    I love the dark side, a very sad write but so well written. 10 from me.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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