FAREWELL TO MY EX

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    this poem has the opposite meaning- the end of love while he is singing about Love, mine is about the end and the break up.

    FAREWELL TO MY EX

    Farewell, my love, Farewell!

    You are with me no more

    You left me for some whore

    But I’ll see you in hell!

     

    Farewell, my love, farewell,

    Life goes on

    And it’s time to move on.

    Everything has an end. Oh, well.

     

    Farewell, my love, farewell,

    I won’t miss you much

    I don’t need your touch,

    I’m living my life as well!

     

    Farewell, my love, farewell,

    I’ll get a new man,

    Maybe not one but ten,

    Who knows, only time will tell.

     

    Only time will tell, after all,

    How long with her you’ll be

    And if you leave her like me

    Because it was not meant to be

    I guess it was not love at all!

     

    THE END

    2009

     

     

     

     

     

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    Hampton commented on FAREWELL TO MY EX

    02-04-2010

    A poetic expression closing the door with finality in the face of one that has subjected you to pain. Well done.
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    stellar commented on FAREWELL TO MY EX

    01-22-2010

    I like this one..I love the drama..i am touch,,,great write ^_^ v
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    goldygirl commented on FAREWELL TO MY EX

    01-18-2010

    Thanks for the tip! I'm glad u like it!
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    Stryx commented on FAREWELL TO MY EX

    01-17-2010

    I think you might want to remove the word 'other' in your third line... At any rate, you made your point, [the dirty sob].'-).
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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