feeling sad today

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    feeling sad today

    Today was not a good day for me ,i felt not gay in anyway.
    It was like a sickness transmitted by the waking break of the eye, as it blinked and took sight a ungay feeling set in to my spine and moved all over the body till i was feel ungay today.
    I like feeling gay the kind of gay you feel when you win a 100 bucks from a lottery ticket once in gay filled day ,i speak of joy in the sense of sadness i am in as i write this poem about beening gay , hurray hurray i wish i was rainbow gay and the rain had stopped falling on my parade.
    This is a once in a while kinda thing you get all the time you might actually been needing some pink blue yellow prescription pills to take away mister blues brother kinda tunes you feel like your living in black world filled with blackness and one in milliions chances of grey, thats a unlike been gay its ungay , but i am gay, because i have written this today.

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    bforibus commented on feeling sad today

    01-24-2009

    I loved the commitement in this poem. it was like a bold coming out the closet thing

    writerspassion commented on feeling sad today

    01-24-2009

    I loved the last section of it. great work

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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