Finding Me......

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    Finding Me......

    As I search to find
    that very invisible thin... line
    I stepped outta my soul
    and embraced a challenge
    to be all that I can be
    Yes...I found myself hidden
    between lies of Mis-education
    which was dictated to me
    totally wromg from
    suppose to be teachers who
    never knew themselves
    So....I set out to find myself
    dodging bullets of hatred, drug addiction
    rape, suicide and death
    And I found a true gem
    A strong black sista who leads
    10 different lives
    sista, mother,father, aunt, preacher
    teacher, friend, etc....
    You know the drill
    I hold my head up and I always welcome
    the unknown where I will side step negativity
    and always grow and stay positive
    Within Myself....
    Then I can pass on to my children
    the gems from a true Queen
    Their......Mother

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    optimistic commented on Finding Me......

    06-09-2009

    I put my self in this poem, as I search to find that very invisible thin line, after reading you poem I could embrace another challenge this my dear is what poems are for.

    ONE2ANOTHER4US commented on Finding Me......

    04-01-2009

    I LIKE YOUR POEM...IT SPEAKS TO PEOPLE..FROM MANY DIFFERENT PLACES..IT SPOKE TO ME...THANK YOU

    Taz commented on Finding Me......

    03-30-2009

    Another I relate 2 you should read in search of my son I really like youre work its all about life and I like that and it comes from youre heart

    Kalonji commented on Finding Me......

    03-29-2009

    Again Very Deep n Touchin

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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