Forever Mine

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    I WRITE THIS FOR HE WHO IS FOREVER MINE

    Forever Mine

    Sometimes I think we wait for moments in time
    Sometimes moments in time await our arrival
    That I dreamed of this time
    That my moment should arrive
    Such a dream of a man could be mine
    So delicious is my moment in this time
    He found me never did he forsake me
    Never did he make a promise not kept
    His word was trust in me and delicious promise to my future
    Sometimes I wonder that I ever lived without him
    Now the joy of him is forever mine
    Him so sweet him so fine
    Dreams of Romance and Loves desires with he who is forever mine
    Iamadreamr
    08/04/09 copywite K.D.G.

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    dahlusion commented on Forever Mine

    08-23-2009

    What a beautiful love story for such a lovey man: be sure to whisper this into his ear.
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    nettieforce1 commented on Forever Mine

    08-19-2009

    love the line: "sometimes moments in time await our arrival." I like your playing with the repeat of "moment in time" in the beginning of your poem. the rest of the poem needs to be tightened. good work!
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    optimistic commented on Forever Mine

    08-08-2009

    I like this poem it give a great flow, and the inspiration to carry on because of him is great, good write.
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    Iamadreamr

    08/08/2009

    Thanks I think I should have given more flow to it but I write in the moment

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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