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RE: Poem CritiquesPlease help. It doesn't feel done yet |
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RE: Poem CritiquesThe Voice of Nations and Generations |
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RE: Poem Critiqueshttp://www.originalpoetry.com/home/poems/view/title/the-grand-drama |
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RE: Poem Critiques"How We Live On Earth" |
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RE: Poem Critiques Please critique my poem.Fate |
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RE: Poem CritiquesFate |
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"Tears"Tears, don’t shy away. Falling, slowly down my face. |
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RE: "Daddy Left" LET ME KNOW PLEASE![Very well done my friend I'm glad to see there are still poets who know how to rhyme and write something I can understand and whose words can touch the heart or soul!!! |
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RE: "Tears"Try to make your verses rhyme. Its a little harder but have a much greater impact on the reader, also don't run your lines together. Make each line stand on its own. I think your theme though is on the right track!!:I myself wrote a poem titled Tears. red: |
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RE: Poem CritiquesThis is the first time I have made any of my poems public or asked anyone to critique them so I would appreciate anyone's honest opinion any tips I can get would be appreciated. Last edited by lindsayt9276 08-04-2023 at 04:24:34 AM |
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RE: Poem CritiquesIM TIRED |
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RE: Poem CritiquesIM TIRED |
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RE: Poem CritiquesTaking a respite from the bustling freeways, I found myself immersed in the tranquility of Boca Woods Country Club - one of the best gated golf communities in Florida. Amidst the embrace of nature, I felt compelled to capture the essence of this place, and thus, with pen in hand, I began to write. |
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Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.
Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.