four letters
no mortal mind
may deem to
STOP
a jovial soul
who blithely
OPTS
breathtaking thoughts
his wits may
POST
like trees as high
as mountain
TOPS
or meadows laid
in flower
POTS
on this alluring hearty
SPOT!
four letters
6 Comments
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Poem Commentary
I wrote four letters. They contain the breadth and height of what I wanted to write. Howbeit enclosing only a sentence with six words, who can stop me from sending them ?
no mortal mind
may deem to
STOP
a jovial soul
who blithely
OPTS
breathtaking thoughts
his wits may
POST
like trees as high
as mountain
TOPS
or meadows laid
in flower
POTS
on this alluring hearty
SPOT!
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Poem Comments
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nhorlandi commented on four letters
01-26-2010
- I'd say this is fantastic! It's not easy to search for four words that ended in rhyme. 10+
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stellar commented on four letters
12-07-2009
- Lovely play of words as ever,...excellent poem and full of wit...
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12/08/2009
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SavVySam commented on four letters
11-18-2009
- Zaph my friend you are the only poet I've read that has this clever approach and I find it very interesting and fun! Nice work! Hope you are well..
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11/22/2009
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Mau commented on four letters
10-06-2009
- Very clever!! I like the set up of this one. I like how the words on top form to point to the four-letter words. Very Cool!!
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10/09/2009
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nhorlandi commented on four letters
09-26-2009
- I like your pattern of rhymes, you gave me a great idea, pal.
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09/28/2009
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09/28/2009
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