Freestyle from Da Mental

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    Freestyle from Da Mental

    Can I take a few lines, a bit of your time 2 express the wind songs that play in my mind
    C u, you’re not the typical kind,…..like that needle in the haystack that is so hard to find
    The type of spirit that just seems to entwine, or the taste on lips that come from red wine
    So many flavors…..
    Different Every Time
    See if I would try to put rhythm to rhyme, there’s no way can I speak on
    The Man
    Without first speaking on
    That Mind
    Mentally you stimulate me, Arousing me with your creativity,
    Mentally stroking me, sooooooooooo very Eroctically!!
    Mind 2 Mind…..so you getting a lot brain from me….
    Intellectual swagger, helps you enter so casually…….Mental muscles contracting….automatically!
    No way to explain what that mind does to me………..makes my mind churn…seductively…….a paper chaser…in control of his destiny
    Got the knowledge, I lick up……happily,…or I might suck it slowly, if this is what is requested of me…..of course I’m talking mentally
    Meaning psychologically I take it all in as he shares his brain with me……If this wasn’t from the big head I would swear he was f%*!ing me…..but I feel him on the inside…mentally penetrating Me
    With the mouthpiece and the mind to match…….and that’s real 2 me……as real as being F****D PHYSiCALLY……Wet & open if I can speak openly
    About
    THE MAN
    THE MIND
    That pounds wisdom in to me ……so skillfully…while DIGGIN DEEPA & DEEPA IN 2ME MENTALLY
    PEACE
    …….This is A freestyle 2 404 from T

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    edgee commented on Freestyle from Da Mental

    06-18-2009

    damn that freestyle is deep as hell, girl you making me wanna come to tha GA becuz you keeping it real....and that is real...

    BLASTHEME commented on Freestyle from Da Mental

    05-29-2009

    This is the type of creative writing that entrances one's mind, as it did to me. First off, I'm brand new to this site, and you are the first artist that I have read, and I readily admit that I enjoyed every moment. I say this, because erotic poetry does nothing for me in the way of mental stimulation as I have seen so many vulgar pieces who claim "erotic poetry" because they use a bunch of explicatives like "f*ck/suck/lick an clit". What u did here was MONUMENTAL. By tha way, Im so new on here

    shyepoet commented on Freestyle from Da Mental

    03-18-2009

    now thats poetry...lol

    dx26 commented on Freestyle from Da Mental

    03-17-2009

    wow that was a good way to show sex but damn you kinda turned me on.... i want to fuck youo mentally if you know what i mean...

    NayInLove commented on Freestyle from Da Mental

    03-17-2009

    this was hott girl!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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