Girl, I Am Feelin' You

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    Girl, I Am Feelin' You
    Girl, I am feelin’ you…

    When the load that you carry is too much to bear
    Because your shoulders hold the weight of the world
    When you reach out for love and no one is there
    You know that I’m feelin’ you, girl.

    Girl, I am feelin’ you…

    Like the rain from the heavens that runs down my face
    Or the gentle pitter-patter on the ceiling
    Like the comfort and warmth of a lover’s embrace
    Girl, it is you that I’m feelin’

    Girl, I am feelin’ you…

    I see what you’ve accomplished as a woman and a mother
    With all the ups and downs you’ve been through
    Still you have the strength to care for yourself and another
    Girl, I am definitely feelin’ you!

    Girl, I admire you.
    All the time, Girl, I want you.
    Girl, I desire you.
    Now that you’re mine, Girl, I flaunt you.

    Girl, I am kissin’ you.
    If you’re hurt, Girl, I am healin’ you.
    Girl, I am missin’ you.
    To be short, Girl, I’m feelin’ you!

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    Mareann commented on Girl, I Am Feelin' You

    10-22-2009

    Beautiful music to my ears, I' m feeling it. Great job, write on my friend... Mareann http://mareannspoetry.ning.com
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    Juliez commented on Girl, I Am Feelin' You

    08-10-2009

    A great love poem! Makes me feel like I want to be that "girl." Maybe in my next life...
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    StraytRootz

    08/10/2009

    thanks for your comment... if it makes you feel like you want to be that "girl" then it was written for you.

    missval commented on Girl, I Am Feelin' You

    03-25-2009

    well spoken one should be lucky to be honored with n words arranged like this
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    sk commented on Girl, I Am Feelin' You

    03-20-2009

    Really nice! I like the line, "Because your shoulders hold the weight of the world"...it sure feels like that some times doesn't it?
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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