Impressions of You

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    Impressions of You

    I can just see you now
    Walking hand in hand
    With a faceless man...
    Through a field or the Arboretum...
    Hair freshly done, blowing softly in the gentle breezes...
    You try vainly to brush from your face a wayward strand…
    You’re barefoot – holding your sandals in your hand
    Feet pedicured (French, of course)...
    Sundress on with matching shades & purse...
    Eating a strawberry ice cream cone...
    Your tongue flickering out ever-so-often...
    To catch the sticky drops running down on your fingers...
    As the sun lingers on your face...
    Out-shone only by your dazzling perfect smile...
    In this dazzling, perfect place
    In this dazzling, perfect time
    Is it all in my mind?
    Have I just caught a fresh Summer breeze in late October?
    Can it be real or have your words taken my mental erogenous zone over?
    Is it Deja Vu?
    Have I truly been "there" with you?
    Somehow I think I have... Some day I think I will...
    Some time when I cross your path...
    Somewhere we'll both stand still,
    And live this dream together.
    Or is it just a mere Fantasy?
    The longing dream of a man who can be...
    Stirred...
    Consumed by the fire of your words...
    Your phrases and sentences...
    Affecting all six of my senses
    Like nothing else does...
    A spell with the power to take me
    Tell me, but don’t wake me
    Simply because...
    I’m likin’ this...

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    Juliez commented on Impressions of You

    08-10-2009

    I like it, I love it!! Very, very romantic. "Have I just caught a fresh Summer breeze in late October?" Super!

    NikkiNichole commented on Impressions of You

    02-21-2009

    That is amazing.... I can picture it all. I love it.

    Browneyes35 commented on Impressions of You

    02-20-2009

    Wonderful!!!!

    sway commented on Impressions of You

    02-19-2009

    every touching it so true i really like it

    Niecy commented on Impressions of You

    02-19-2009

    Wow ~ So devinely written, your words definitely caressed me! I have yet to experience that devine true love...still abiding hope awaits me! FRESH

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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