GOOD GOD

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    GOOD GOD

    OH MY GOD i'VE TRIED.
    I'VE SCREAMED , PROMISED AND LIED
    JUST A BIT OF GIVE AND TAKE
    IS ALL I ASK FROM YOU.

    I PRAISE BEG AND BESEECH YOU
    I AM ALWAYS DENIED.
    MY HANDS ARE RED,REALLY RED
    FROM THE CHOICES I HAVE MADE
    ALL I'M ASKING LORD THAT IF YOU'RE REALLY THERE
    TO THINK OF ME
    TO HELP ME OUT
    TO TAKE AWAY MY PAST

    IF I MAY, I WILL PARAPHRASE THE GREAT JANIS JOPLIN
    OH LORD WON'T YOU BUY ME A MERCEDED BENZ.,,,A COLORED TV, AND A NIGHT ON THE TOWN. I'M COUNTING ON YOU LORD,,PLEASE DON'T LET ME DOWN.

    GOD IS GOOD, GOD IS GREAT, AFTER MY $8 REBATE.

    LAUGH WITH ME AND ENJOY THE THE THOUGHT
    THAT SOMEONE IS LOOKING AT YOU , LIKE IT OR NOT

    NOW THAT I HAVE YOUR ATENTION LORD, YOU MUST UNDERSTAND

    I'VE PUT MY FAITH IN YOU GOOD GOD NO BLOOD UPON MY HANDS

    I CAN FORGIVE , AND I WANT TO BUT SURELY YOU KNOW I HAVE NO CLUE

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    poetmaker commented on GOOD GOD

    03-20-2009

    your poem was very delightful and entertaining. keep up the good work. you are a true artist in poetry.

    Rodi commented on GOOD GOD

    12-02-2008

    I liked it, and be sure God hears every prayer. Just grab that child like faith that we all once cared and you will hear Him speak to you.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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