Hated Life

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  • Anger
    • sosmooth51
    • is walking on a bed of nails... behind fire..infront of me death..stay? or leap away?

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    thank you

    Hated Life

        I'm blind to love, i see evil through my voice. I

    feed off of hate and turn it into life. I'm blind to

    love never knew what it was. Never knew of its

    existence. Flowers!?! Roses!?! I always thought

    they were plants with colored shit on them. 

    Heaven... just a place that exists in the

    imagination. Life!?!  I always thought that was a

    nick name for  describing never ending pain.

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    precpres commented on Hated Life

    07-13-2009

    lol. I enjoyed reading this one too. You have a unique way of getting your point across.

    sosmooth51

    07/13/2009

    THANK U..IM GLAD SOMEBODY GETS IT... I HATE THE USUAL FORMAT OF PETRY..SHOULD BE LIKE WATER...FORMLESS...

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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