The Un-Morning

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  • sosmooth51
  • is walking on a bed of nails... behind fire..infront of me death..stay? or leap away?

The Un-Morning

I woke up in a dream, and burning from cold fire. I was awake but it felt as though my soul was still asleep. I had a pain that was a sensation, telling me that at least I was still alive...or was I? I felt dead spirits trying to leave my body. So tired I didn't care if I had one to myself. Dead cells leaving me. I created water with color added and an abundance of sodium chloride. My soul is breaking. My thoughts crumle. my life has ran away from me. I sleep in a graveyard. I'm trapped in a place that doesn't exist. I breath out love and breath in hate. I'm sitting wondering and waiting. A minute feels like infinity. Life and death feel so similiar I can't tell the difference anymore. I can't move, yet my mind is moving at 1,000 miles per hour. Maybe thats's what life is after all, just a thought. I live in a dream and sleep in a nightmare, but I will die in my mind.

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Crush commented on The Un-Morning

07-13-2009

your poetry is disturbingly beautiful...i know my words are strange together but this is all i can say to describe you. i absoloutely adore it.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

sosmooth51’s Poems (15)

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WHAT NEXT? 4
The Last Sentence 1
CELL IN A BLACK SOUL 0
I yell through my eyes, my tears become my words, {part 2} not really. 1
I yell through my eyes.......be
cuase my tears become my words ......
0
WAR OF THOUGHT AND ACTION 0
The Idea of Sex, and Yours? 2
The End of the Begining 0
The Un-Morning 1
In Love With Death 1
What Am I 0
Hated Life 1
I 0
I CAN NOT FIND US 1
WHAT STRANGE NEW WORLD 0