I CAN NOT FIND US

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    • is walking on a bed of nails... behind fire..infront of me death..stay? or leap away?

    I CAN NOT FIND US


    Where are you? I need to find you. I am blind but still I search for you, like I search for myself, becuase you are me, I am you, we are we. Your Sincerity is what leaves me blind in total darkness, Imay sound pitiful, but it is becuase I can not find you, and since you are me, without you I can not find myself

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    precpres commented on I CAN NOT FIND US

    07-13-2009

    You took a different approach and I liked that. Worded very well.
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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