HAUNTING ERR

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    ONE OF MY BEST IN 2010.............READ ON.

    HAUNTING ERR
    In the cold of the nite I stare
    Appraising the calm air
    Of the breezy warm weather
    which by reservations I bear

    I reverie the quitness
    Apart from the strange creepiness
    A depressing coldness
    Damping my heart in its clamminess

    Thoughts of you tumble in my mind
    In a dizzying gyre they grind
    The frosty drill of their rind
    leave me wishing your memories to unbind

    we had set out, two souls unbridled
    Ravaging passions bundled
    scourging fires kindled
    Entwined spirits entangled

    To hike the hill we set our mettle
    Oblivious to ensuing battle
    Fears sealed in a bottle
    By love brimming from our kettle

    Then struck the blizzard
    Cast by an evil wizard
    Veiled in a 'friendly' vizard
    Filled stones in our gizzard

    Spirits cast into a freak
    Going forth seemingly bleak
    we abandoned our vie for a peak
    The band we inevitably had to break

    Hanging on emotional cliffs now we bleed
    Longing for a need to heed
    But we dishonored our creed
    It could never be the same indeed

    BY PRETTYKAN82

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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