I will be there.....

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    To a friend who lost his mom awhile ago...........

    I will be there.....

    It would be easy to say
    ''I understand the pain''
    But not even I
    could fully comprehend
    The emptiness and Agony
    That you have had to go through
    at the dawn of each day
    Since her demise.

    But I can promise you,
    Now that am here
    I will be there

    On that chilly gloomy morning
    When the sudden air of despair
    Grips you at the start of another day

    On those rainy days
    filled with uncertainties
    where her wisdom once cleared the path
    Her guidance like the carpet on the muddy road
    Her motherly wings, the sheltering umbrella
    Hard shoes to fill
    nevertheless will wipe the mud off
    when u slip
    Help you to a drier place

    On those nights when the storm is ranging
    the thunder roaring,
    You are scared out of ur wits,
    wonna hide in ur closet
    I promise to hold u close tightly
    Till it's all calm

    And on that bright day
    when all u recapture
    are the irreplacable moments
    I wonna share in that momentarily rare smile
    that only the tenderness
    of her memoriescould arouse 
    Coz though she is gone
    She will forever be in your heart
    and in the hearts of all those who loved her.

    May her Lovely  soul rest
    in eternal peace.
     



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    blackfootlady commented on I will be there.....

    12-09-2009

    Ty for the write ,It hit real close to home but with my Dad.Your friend has my condolenses.God Bless

    Prettykan82

    12/09/2009

    ...thanks blackfoot, and sorry about your dad, how long ago?

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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