THE TREE BY MY BEDROOM WINDOW

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    THE TREE BY MY BEDROOM WINDOW

    This mighty cedar tree
    That hovers above my abode
    That embellishes my mornings
    Imparts a coolness in the hot middays
    And enchants my evenings
    with the murmur of its myriad leaves

    I reverence
    its lofty tops
    Strewn out of its stalwart trunk and limbs
    The foot thick back
    It's irresistable to cuddle
    Her beauty entrapping
    with such tight perfection
    And an encompassing spiritual absorption

    In spring
    its leaves are springy and alive
    It defies the stormy summers
    with a meritorious guile
    Fall expostulates with it
    but it boldly resists the metamorphosis

    But in winter
    It seems to acquire
    an antithetical luster
    Despite the lurid chill
    The snow tapped leaves and branches
    Are an hypnotising pulchritude
    Its hard not to venerate it with worshipful eyes
    What an ethereal beauty.

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    Lunabella commented on THE TREE BY MY BEDROOM WINDOW

    01-27-2011

    This makes me want to come play in your tree :) its so vivid in details its an awesome write :D -Luna

    cutbanksam commented on THE TREE BY MY BEDROOM WINDOW

    01-27-2011

    I really think this is a good write. My only question is, do you think you may possibly be using too many big words?

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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