HELL WILL BE WAITING

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HELL WILL BE WAITING

Hell will be waiting

You’ve still plenty of time

To dredge the blackened pit

Of your dark and tainted mind

Dreaming of wicked ways

To spread your evil slime.

 

The flickering of pleasure

From the depths of hooded eyes

As you trail your fingers lightly

Down the hollow of her spine

You recognize the signals

She’s falling for your lies.

 

Stop! I want to scream

Don’t let him take your soul

He’ll blind you with his smile

Submerge you in his charm

Quickly lure you in his web

In his most convincing role.

 

You predator of the night

Stalking innocence for prey

Feeding your perverse desires

Debauchery your game

Exhilaration from inflicting pain

Triumphant you’ve had your way.

 

Hell’s demons will be waiting

They’ll vivisect your soul

Claw apart your venomous mind

Reap the evil that you’ve sowed

Victim of your own deception

For eternity pay your toll.

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Hiporlacking commented on HELL WILL BE WAITING

11-17-2010

I read it as if you were talking about a womanizer. One who is possibly even a sociopath.Charming the ladies just to have his way. My memory might fail me but the song "Dandy" by the Kinks comes to mind. After reading the other comments I don't think that's what you meant...but you've portrayed a dark future for whoever it's about quite well.

julieannetx

11/18/2010

You are right...It was written about a womanizer...one why preys on young innocent girls...sociopath...psychopath it can really be applied to any type predator

Marsink commented on HELL WILL BE WAITING

11-17-2010

Distorted and steamy images boil in a cauldron of dark judgment: and that's just the first entree! A tone of retribution washes over your skillful work! Great meter and rhyme to push this toward a frantic retort! Applause building!!

julieannetx

11/18/2010

Thank you for such kind compliments. I am honored.

Kanicki commented on HELL WILL BE WAITING

11-16-2010

JuliaAnne - this is an excellent write. As I read it I can't help but think about child predators; the life time of pain they inflict on the innocent. Peace, Light and Love

julieannetx

11/17/2010

You are right it is about wicked evil people who prey on the innocent. Thanks for the kind words. Julie

JadedJezzabel commented on HELL WILL BE WAITING

11-16-2010

intense message of demonic possesion....could be actual demon or possibly a man.......or a new habit ne has picked up.........good poetry.

julieannetx

11/18/2010

Thank you!

kdarcy commented on HELL WILL BE WAITING

10-31-2010

Very well done, loved your choice of words. The message was clear, nice write ... I like your style, be well k

julieannetx

11/01/2010

Thanks so much...

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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