Our Last Thought

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Our Last Thought

We always were so worried
About which one of us passed first
Neither wanting to be alone
Knowing last would be the worst

For some uncanny reason
God saved us from that strife
He let us die as meant to be
As husband with his wife

Lying in each others' arms
Neither one of us distraught
We faced our death together
With “thank you” our last thought

 

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stellar commented on Our Last Thought

01-14-2011

Great story and imagination Juliene...you sure is a talented poet,,,I enjoy this one...^_^ v

julieannetx

01/14/2011

Thank you for such sweet words! Much appreciated.

ginga commented on Our Last Thought

01-08-2011

Julie, The thought of one going before the other is such a fear. Your pic poem brings that worry to an end and results in a beautiful love peom. ginga

julieannetx

01/08/2011

I think my characters in the poem were a lot more calm about it than I would be! :) Thanks for reading!

Marsink commented on Our Last Thought

01-06-2011

It is captured for tribute to 'lovers who died with undying love'! Lovely and sad, but we of their future have found them to consider the legacy left by this love. A noble poetic offering, here, and on the forum! Applause building!

tierra7 commented on Our Last Thought

01-05-2011

Jule, I really appreciate the thoughts that went into this piece....remarkably profound!! you did an Awesome job on this penn...a royal 10+ Namaste, Tierra@}-'-,

julieannetx

01/05/2011

Wow! Thanks so much! I

FranzJ commented on Our Last Thought

01-05-2011

ture love and soul mate - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

julieannetx’s Poems (29)

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SO LONG AGO 13
The Cloak of Friendship 11
Mr. Moon 10
Should 7
Our Last Thought 5
The One 10
Chameleons 11
The Colors Of My World 7
My Sister 7
The Biker's Burial 17
A Tribute To Our Victory 15
Thanksgiving Humor 12
The Forbidden Fork 5
The Reunion 7
The Wildflower 5
DELANEY 2
HELL WILL BE WAITING 7
The Wave 2
Nightmare 5
Black Clouds 4
DISCARDED 2
A MOTHER'S DAY TRIBUTE 3
AN EGO MADE OF STONE 3
WITHOUT TRACE 4
DANGLING 7