Mr. Moon

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  • Spiritual
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  • Life
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  • Confusion

    Poem Commentary

    I wrote this poem for the Picture Poetry forum.

    Mr. Moon
    Mr. Moon

    Oh, Crystal Ball up in the sky
    Can you tell me why?
    I know you hold the answer
    My heart can’t bear another lie!

    I can’t hear you, Mr. Moon!
    Only the crying of the loon
    I’m afraid I’m going to break
    Reveal something to me soon!

    I hear the whisper of the lake
    The gentle splashing of the wake
    But the silence from Your glow
    Is almost more than I can take

    Hence the night becomes surreal
    Somewhere deep inside I feel
    You spreading peace and warmth
    As my heart begins to heal

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    Madelynn commented on Mr. Moon

    01-21-2011

    Julie, this is badass!! The way you wrote this so simply- and the meaning so profound! I felt like I was walking with you, or sitting on the porch with you, lookin' up at that big pearl- feeling your despair, awaiting resolution! This is tight lady!!- Im thinkin' my favorite of yours so far, and again- the simplicity of the write just seals the mood perfectly!! Maddi
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    julieannetx

    01/21/2011

    Thanks Maddi! So did you get your computer problems solved?

    Madelynn

    01/22/2011

    -600 dollars later- here I am. lol! Now I just have a hole in my account, lol! Technology sucks,lol- we should all move out to the mountains and start a OP commune, lol!

    Qualin commented on Mr. Moon

    01-14-2011

    STAREING AT THE MOON NIGHTLY IS A RITUIAL AM I ALONE IN THIS QUEST? I THINK NOT ONLY THE LOVERS OF GODS GREAT WORKS!!!! VERY GOOD WRITE MY NEW FRIEND...QUALIN
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    julieannetx

    01/14/2011

    Thanks Qualin...I think a lot of people share your ritual...

    FranzJ commented on Mr. Moon

    01-14-2011

    the silence of the moon may be the healing power - forcing you to look inside yourself to find the healing amswwer
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    julieannetx

    01/16/2011

    Well said!

    stellar commented on Mr. Moon

    01-14-2011

    The healing powers of nature...I really love the theme and how you penned it...i ever so love the moon and you justify its beauty...lovely poem! ^_^ v
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    julieannetx

    01/14/2011

    I too love the moon and the clear night sky. There are some things for me that only nature seems to truly heal. As I alluded to in the poem "Mr. Moon" is many times my link to The Great Spirit In The Sky. glad you liked it

    ccslim commented on Mr. Moon

    01-12-2011

    The yearning for answers led to a delightfully well written write!
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    julieannetx

    01/12/2011

    Thank you!

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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