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    Pulling back the veil from your words, I see what lies beneath
    Peace and love had guided me upon this mount
    Underneath your precious words, like poison from below
    Truth or lies like heroin make the addiction to you grow
    I have been allowed to prophesy,
    An’ have been given permission
    To shut the heavens an turn the waters into blood.
    In and out of my soul you flow
    Sacret is where who hold thine,
    Be at rest, an’ sure inside truth for it bares no disease
    I bath in it to fill my self with the essence of my devotion for your private show
    I am your slave and crave you still as my dependence grows
    You soak my wounds, yet cut them deeper.
    The pain a hidden bliss,
    Holding on to this forbidden happiness.
    So kiss me now and soothe the pain,
    Seal my fate with your kiss,
    Cause tomorrow will dawn the day that my love my soon fade away.
    Hold me with the sacred chains that only we can see
    I love you but I hate you, I would like for you to live but much more I would applaud.
    Your death, my freedom comes as mercy when you exhale your last breath.
    Your poison seduction put to an end,
    My blackened heart to hell I send.
    An’ to hell will you lay on a bed of nails for forsakening mine,
    I am queen, for you are my king, these words are faithful an’ true.
    I will cry and laugh with thoughts of your demise until the end of time.
    But to what end is this,
    For there is a never-ending sauga.

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    kpeery09 commented on Hidden

    01-26-2011

    This is a Beauty...I like it alot, keep up the good work, I love how you described the pain within its absolutely perfectionism that it is.

    Paradice21 commented on Hidden

    06-21-2009

    I enjoyed this poem very much...I did have to give it some thought And Love the use of Vocabulary and certain words used to describe the pain or meaning of this poem! You did A Wonderful Job!!

    cassius commented on Hidden

    04-13-2009

    toxic your words if i read them right is the back bone and the strenght of a recovering addict you are a true poet bravo(ten)

    DeepEclipse commented on Hidden

    04-07-2009

    The twists and turns of the labryinth of love. How complicated it can be. There were parts that lost me, but in all I found this... refreshing.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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