I need you now.

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I'm pretty low at the moment. I've been working hard for almost a year to do what people have told me I'm 'made for', money is drying up. I've put the work in and Ive risked myself emotionally. I need things to start falling into place now, and soon. This poem is about beseeching for the karmic energies to come my way for what I have put out over the years. I hope you like it.

I need you now.

 Ancestors and those who've passed,
Lover's old and new.
Energy from karmic good,
It's now I come to you.

Years have gone by, I've worked hard.
To be the best I can.
Learned lessons taught,I've paid you heed,
I need a helping hand.

I've been so patient with others woes,
Helping all who've come.
I'm tired, weary, beaten down.
I need support now mum.

I call my female line, all gone,
I call on angels light.
I ask the spirits of balanced means,
Help me to still fight.

What I seek to do in life,
To help, to heal and more.
I know I need to earn from this,
But money's not at it's core.

So close to tears, back bent and sore.
I beseech you, 'How?'
If karma still exists today,
I say, I need you now.


 

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MindNumbing commented on I need you now.

09-17-2010

Beautifully written, Vic... and I wish you well on whatever path you're on. Those karmic energies will come your way in time. No good deed goes unseen or unanswered. :)

ApaqRasgirl commented on I need you now.

09-17-2010

another wonderful write dear, your feeling and emotions are painted so well in your words that you flowed very smooth......blessings of peace and light to you dear...**Namaste.......love asha

gregster commented on I need you now.

09-17-2010

whoa!!!!! as a poem this is beautiful but calling angels and asking spirits means something deeper than u might think of...remember CHRIST died for you so stay strong cuz GOD got ur back....no need to call on creations call upon the CREATOR JEHOVAH

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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