Raindrops on the glass

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    Raindrops on the glass

    Have you ever watched the raindrops, 
    When they hit the window pane?
    Perfect free fall interupted,
    Invisible wall stops it. Maims.

    Entire, perfect globule,
    A drift in your baseless goal,
    Ceasing your direction,
    A blunt and merciless soul.

    Invisible walls detract us,
    They build into mazes of lies.
    Unseen they push and beguile us,
    Into reversing our course at times.

    Such cru-elty possesses the fates,
    That they recklessly ruin our lives,
    Before we've even screamed our arrival,
    They have mapped before them, our demise.

    Be it little deaths of small mercies.
    Be it gargantuan humourless tacts.
    They are terrible in their morals.
    They are ruthless inforcing their facts.

    Though a cliche it sounds, on the surface.
    Two hearts separated by merest miles.
    Worlds apart, in circumstance, they reside in.
    Unbounded love spills the tears 'neath the smiles.

    Many of us there are, in the ether.
    To many to count, were I had time and space.
    So I mourn every raindrop expired.
    As it's course is destroyed by the pane.

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    Marsink commented on Raindrops on the glass

    10-04-2010

    I'm notorious for getting off the beaten path: sounds like a woman in love, mourning the indequacies of the net. 'Weather' friendship, or pursuit of love, it can be like the colliding of the rain on the pane, with abiguous and unknown fronts of climate changing perceptions. I just climbed out of a friendship that I somehow messed up...I find it beautifully creative and would love to see more of the 'undark' that posesses your soul! Applause building!

    Vicereine

    10/04/2010

    Thank you Marsink. The writing of 'undark' poetry has been a recently new development with myself, dark poetry is all I wrote for so long it is something of an adjustment. I will persevere with it though. Congratulations with Love Potion #9 as well!!

    Rygar commented on Raindrops on the glass

    09-29-2010

    in the ether... i love it.. :-) Interesting write Vic. 10

    Vicereine

    10/04/2010

    Thanks Rygar :)

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

    Vicereine’s Poems (23)

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