When the whispered voices set in...

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I'm sure I am not alone when I say that we all have periods of utter doubt and confusion. I am in the midst of one of my own. I have been working hard to become qualified to help others, set up a site for holistic promotion and ways of life. Look into progressive therapies for all etc etc. I believe whole heartedly in the choices I have made, but it is not earning me money and we are fast owing to much. This poem is a result of my wavering belief and perpetual torment.

When the whispered voices set in...

Everyone, no matter how good, 
Has days where they change from red riding hood,
In to the wolf and eat their kin,
It's when the whispered voices set in.

Everyone, no matter how bad,
Have days where they are more than sad.
Have days where all the effort put in,
Amounts to nought, the voices set in.

The whispered voices, hush and swarm
They creep in your ears, when you're nice and warm.
When you're wrapped up tight within your bed.
The whispered voices sit in your head.

They nudge your nightmares back into full flow,
They steer negativity, show it where to go.
Where all your doubts and fears seep in.
It's then the whispered voices set in.

I'm sat here now, with circles of black,
Beneath my eyes. A hunch-ed back.
I'm weary from 3 days of bad sleep.
Where the whispered voices seep.

The nightmares have come, again, they are here.
They drown me, confuse me and play on my fears.
I'm chased, hunted, tortured. Made to choose which kin,
I am to save. The voices set in.

I'm quiet, subdued. I doubt all that I do.
The good that I desperately want to see through.
Belief in my choices, it starts to wear thin.
Because whispered voices have now set in.

So I write to you all. As I beg and I plead.
Not quite ready yet to bare and bleed.
I urge you to listen hard when the air gets thin.
Prepare for when whispered voices set in.

 

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Charlie23 commented on When the whispered voices set in...

10-03-2010

This is well written, and had my focus while at the same time I found myself listening for those that taunt me....

gregster commented on When the whispered voices set in...

09-17-2010

They nudge your nightmares back into full flow, They steer negativity, show it where to go. Where all your doubts and fears seep in. It's then the whispered voices set in.The nightmares have come, again, they are here. They drown me, confuse me and play on my fears. I'm chased, hunted, tortured. Made to choose which kin, I am to save. The voices set in. ur verses in subliminal messages say exactly whom is annoying or giving u false hope.....voices of the fallen angels twist the light into darkness.every poem i read on this site have subliminal messages on fallen angels in dreams or like mind control....NO OFFENSE.....BUT PLEASE BE IN PEACE AS GOD JEHOVAH BLESS U WITH TRUTH OF A SUPERNATURAL REALITY

Marsink commented on When the whispered voices set in...

09-16-2010

I have been in stark reality, awake on my bed, when whispers drew close upon my ears to fill my sunlit afternoon with dread. I wish it was merely fantasy, but I have it in my mind as experience. Your writing in this realm is very magnetic and macabre! Applause!!

Vicereine

09/16/2010

Many thanks for your kind words Marsink.

Vicereine commented on When the whispered voices set in...

09-14-2010

Thank you so much. It is some solace that it appears most writers go through the same thing. Yet I do not think it only afflicts writers. Anyone who is trying to make a difference in their own way is often beseiged in this way. Thankyou again

ApaqRasgirl commented on When the whispered voices set in...

09-14-2010

that was a very emotion filled write dear, yes I am all to familiar with those voices, wonderful read dear.........love asha

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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