i wanna spend whole Evening with you

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    i wanna spend whole Evening with you

    i wanna spend whole Evening with you.........
    can you make
    my wish come true...?
    i wanna spend
    whole evening with you.....

    when the sky is dark,
    the moon is bright
    i ll hug you v tight,
    everything will be all right

    red rose petals every where....
    & the candle Light burning there....

    im wearing dress of dark red,
    & laying in ur embrace in the bed...
    touching yr lips, gazing into ur eyes
    on your chest,puting my hed....

    i ll hear yr heartbeats & will let u know
    for you how much i care...
    i ll tear my heart into pieces,
    & with u all my love, i ll share....

    then u ll hear,
    every heartbeat is calling your name
    & telling you, I really Love you....

    so please....!
    make my wish come true.....!
    i wanna spend whole Evening with you.........

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    Chaos128 commented on i wanna spend whole Evening with you

    10-22-2009

    A touching account of true attraction and admiration. It's clear you put a lot of effort into this. you should be proud of yourself. Good job!

    kanwal

    10/25/2009

    ys im already proud on myself lol thnksss have a good day

    landriano commented on i wanna spend whole Evening with you

    09-22-2009

    you got my attention that's deeply heart felt i like this alot

    kanwal

    09/22/2009

    thnkss fo likinggg thnx alottts u noe u r da 1st 1 who comented on my poetry i joined dis site 2day im happy 2 hav ur comntssss at 1st

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.