I Wish I Was A Star

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    I Wish I Was A Star
    I wish I was a star just hanging,

    Chilling long side the

    Moon..

    I wish I may I wish I might just

    Chilling with the heavenly stars

    Neighbors

    I wish I may I wish I might make you

    My perfect friends

    Just hanging, chilling shooting the

    Breeze..

    I wish I may I wish I might gaze down

    From the blacken

    Skies…

    Scattering gold dust around your feet

    I wish I may I wish I might make

    Friends with the

    Moon ...


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    countrypoet commented on I Wish I Was A Star

    03-15-2009

    Nice metaphors;very clever storyline.I really like this poem.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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