if the truth was tolled, happen

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    if the truth was tolled, happen

    Lies were made to keep ones safe from harm, but lying or keeping secrets can be dangerous to have because lying can make you have vision of killing ones self, killing ones closes to you, or killing ones who you want to be closes to, but telling the truth can open doors to happens. Although telling the truth can be the worst thing to do, because finding out what people would say finding out the truth. Would it change your life to hell or will it be the best thing to do to get out of hell?

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    Plot121 commented on if the truth was tolled, happen

    12-11-2008

    you begin the poem well then you some how lose the reader in the middle then your completely ,ost by the end. I think you have way to many ideas crunched into such a small place. Using exsamples would help your reader enjoy your work alot more. Rober
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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