What is this Inner Beast?

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  • went_love
  • is a ok ha ha but he wants to know whats up with u

What is this Inner Beast?

The love I have for you is like a best in a cage that is chained up in the dark abyss, waiting to be free from its prison; the longer this beast is trapped the more enraged it gets, and soon I'll take over and hunt you down. For now this beast is contained and under control, but for how long can it be held back?

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christliked commented on 143!!!

03-24-2009

This poem has more structureand like Plot I love it's possible journey.Dont explain what it is discribe what it is.

Plot121 commented on 143!!!

12-11-2008

There are a couple of spelling corrections that need to be done in this piece and the images were good but I think you just scratched the surface of what this work could truely do. Robert...

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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