Granted Wishing

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    Granted Wishing
    I ask for so much but give back so little.
    I wine and wine, wishing for something to happen, it finally happens but I don’t now what to do now that my wish is granted.
    A wish is finally granted. I’m so happy but… what do I do now? I don’t know what to do, so it goes away. Dem it why didn’t I do something?
    What is the point to make a wish that you won’t be happy with because you didn’t now what to do or how to work with it?
    Is there I wish that I can make that I won’t want to ask for another wish?

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    BigDaddyCash commented on Granted Wishing

    11-04-2009

    Thank you for joining my group of friends I pleased to have you as a friend. Real success begins with a friend and everything else in life is a bonus. If your dreams and desires are to become rich and famous and you set your goals to make this your main purpose in life, what good would it all be without friends? You should treat a friendship like a rose garden, feed it with love, kindness and understanding and watch it blossom into a beautiful rose. There is nothing more valuable than a true friend, all other successes in your life's journey mean nothing if you can't share them with a friend. LOL, BDC P.S. Let's see some of your magical creations. What I've read shows great talent, reading your poetry is a delight.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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