Real Fake Love

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  • went_love
  • is a ok ha ha but he wants to know whats up with u

Real Fake Love

I close my eyes to see my true love, or am i just dreaming of a fantasy.
watching my back all day and night, holding me close keeping the fear of being sad and alone away.
Under the moon light, by my side with food, water and conferred awaking over the sunrise with my fantasy. When the sun is highest in the sky we cook and clean, keeping each other happy.
From year to year we hug and hug, from month to month we kiss and kiss, from day to day we say we love each other, thanking god for meeting each other and hoping the day never ends.

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brokenwings25 commented on Real Fake Love

12-11-2009

I think everyone dreams of a love like that! I did not understand the rhythm and it did not flow easy but a good start.

christliked commented on Real Fake Love

03-24-2009

They just seem to be words without purpose or feeling

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

went_love’s Poems (15)

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keep in mind (from a movie) 1
nature is more then one 0
evil nature 1
from a show 0
Longing For Something 1
Real Fake Love 2
Loneliness 1
Granted Wishing 1
if the truth was tolled, happen 1
different ways to show ones love. 1
Wishing to be with you, 0
Wanting what sense doesn’t under stand. 0
Wishing for the Truth 0
Hide Behind the Truth in the Shadows. 0
What is this Inner Beast? 2